Friday 3 December 2010

siesta (haiga)

siesta
two pairs of legs
rest side by side

3 comments:

  1. I really like this. But one minor quibble - siesta kind of gives the game away. The fragment bit could be slightly different. On the other hand, the phrase is simply brilliant!

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  2. Siesta does seem redundant in the haiga, but the word just sounded catchy and then stayed...now for alternatives...

    still
    two pairs of legs
    rest side by side

    zzzzz...
    two pairs of legs
    rest side by side

    snore...
    two pairs of legs
    rest side by side

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